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On the Writing Process: First Draft or Not First Draft . . . That is the Question

8/25/2014

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People often ask me about my writing process, so I thought I'd share some of it from time to time. If you have a question about a particular aspect of writing or publishing, fire away. I'll do my best to answer it. One part of writing that has always baffled me is first drafts.

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've been fascinated by this ever since I was in the seventh grade and my English teacher, Mrs. Markum, tried to make me write drafts. I could not figure out what she meant by "first draft." Whenever I've written anything, it comes out the way I want it to the first time. I literally cannot think of a better way to express it. I figured by "first draft" she meant that she wanted me to rearrange what I said the first time, not completely rewrite it using different words. 


The whole rewriting process was, and always has been, a mystery to me. I never rewrite. I revise, yes; I'll replace a word with a stronger word or tweak the flow of a sentence, maybe add a sentence to clarify. Very rarely I'll add something descriptive, but I never significantly change what I write the first time. From talking to other writers, I'm beginning to think I'm a freak of nature in this area. 


My sister, author J.P. Choquette, who does write first drafts, suspects it has something to do with my speed which is more turtle than hare. A comfortable pace for me is somewhere around 500 words an hour. I write for two hours every week day (from 6 to 8 in the morning) and average just over 1,000 words a day. But I might spend the first half hour or hour staring at the screen lost in rereading what I wrote the day before and imagining what might happen next. When I start writing, it's usually in fits and spurts. Really long fits and really fast spurts. 


To show you that there can be vast differences between writers, even coming from the same gene pool, my sister averages 1,700 words--an hour. This is a first draft which she says is like Swiss cheese . . . she has to go back later and fill in the holes. Here's what she says about the process of writing:


" I say, throw all the advice out the window. Seriously, focus on what works for you. When I first started writing fiction seriously (as in, I wanted to publish a book) I tried outlining and mapping things out, making character sketches, etc., because I read author interviews and that's what real authors did. Well, it didn't work for me. As soon as everything was outlined, something strange happened. I didn't want to write anymore. It was like someone read the ending of a book to me before I'd gotten to chapter four. 

"Instead, I use a process I call Just 15-Minutes. Basically I write 15-minutes, most days of the week. If I have time and mental energy, I often write longer but I don't force myself to. 15-minutes isn't long but I write quickly. Also, I do not allow myself to read what I've already written during this time (too stressful to switch between critical editor brain to creative writer brain) and I don't fix typos or daydream about what should happen next. I just sit and write. Like exercise, I try to make writing time a game or challenge (how much can I write in just 15-minutes?), not punishment. You can find a two-part series on how to successfully finish your book by clicking here."



Since there are probably as many methods as there are writers, feel free to share yours in the comments. And if you do, tell me, first draft, or not first draft? For that is the question.

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Glen Robinson link
8/25/2014 06:07:38 am

I'm with you, Celeste. I read about authors who swear you can't write anything serious without doing draft after draft. I write it, revise it, maybe tweak and proofread it, and move on. Also, you're right in that speed makes a BIG difference. On my National Novel Writing Month projects, where I might write 5,000 to 8,000 words a day, I find myself changing characters' names from chapter to chapter, and it's easy to have continuity and other problems. Bottom line is, make it your best work, but do what works for you.

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Céleste Perrino-Walker link
8/25/2014 07:28:22 am

5,000-8,000 words A DAY????? WOW! I always thought I was a fast writer, but now I think I'm confusing prolific with fast.

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Glen Robinson
8/25/2014 07:30:28 am

Fast, of course, does not equal good...

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J.P. Choquette link
9/2/2014 01:08:31 am

Good point, Glen--fast doesn't equal good. And I'm now trying a new tactic: plotting while I write. At least this way I (hopefully) won't end up with so many oddities in that first fast draft!

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Céleste Perrino-Walker link
9/2/2014 01:31:52 am

Oooh, that's sounds intriguing, J.P. How do you plot WHILE you write?? I've plotted whole books out ahead of time before, and I just wrote one completely by the seat of my pants, but I can't figure out how you'd plot a book while writing it.

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J.P. Choquette link
9/4/2014 03:47:31 am

I'm keeping a "log" of what goes on in each chapter as I write. This way I can hopefully avoid the whole "Wait a minute! She just had a gun in her hand but now it's on the mantle" type problem. It's an idea I heard about on a podcast, by someone named "The Tattooed Writer." :)

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